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Sharon Young's avatar

In the section at the magic dealer, "Tafarai" is used in the first and next to last paragraphs but "Tafari" in the one describing the Somnaris Enchantment. PS I don't point this stuff out to be picky but that when I see them it causes a "stumble" while reading that breaks the flow (the "enchantment" if you will, grin).

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DB Green's avatar

Thank you for pointing that out—it's all corrected now. And no worries at all, Sharon. I really do appreciate it when you catch these little typos that slip through the net. It means a lot! 🙂

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